So I take my sketch and move the camera a bit to remove the flatness. I decided to change Tommy's head tilt for another effect than sadness, more looking down in frustration. You'll notice that I still have some fleshing out to do, as well as working more with making the perspective work. This will all be done in the inking stage. I can leave some things vague since I'm inking it. Earlier in this issue I explain the changes in the basement room. So you'll just have to wait to see why things look different a bit.
A lifelong comics fan, Mike W. Belcher is the writer/artist of MAN IN THE MASK. A story he's had with him for over 20 years.